Dimitri’s Forbidden Submissive by Ann Mayburn

Dimitri’s Forbidden Submissive by Ann MayburnDmitri's Forbidden Submissive by Ann Mayburn

Series: Submissive's Wish #2
Genres: BDSM Romance, Erotic Romance
Published by Fated Desires Publishing LLC on May 4, 2014
Pages: 454
Format: eBook
Source: Purchased
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The Delight

The story told is heartbreaking and erotic at the same time, leaving you wanting to cry, but also have a wonderfully sexy time with your own partner because you don’t know when it can be taken away. Dimitri is totally alpha and dominant to the bone and his boner. Rya is a sassy, non-apologetic kinky switch that allowed me to embrace her life. I loved these two together, but there was also a time when I felt their relationship changed too much and became something I didn’t like.

In Ivan’s Captive Submissive we get to meet a scary Dimitri as he helps in Ivan’s kidnap fantasy of Gia while also offering to buy Gia from Ivan. I kind of held off for a while reading this one because of my first impression of him was scary and I wasn’t certain I could like him.

Dimitri and Rya’s story start shortly after the Submissive’s Wish Charity Auction, where Rya was auctioned off to a Dom who won two auctions. Rya got food poisoning and in the time she was down, the Dom who purchased her was falling for the other submissive he won. Now that Dom is looking for someone to take on Rya as he feels guilty for not giving her the experience she wanted. In the mean time Rya is turning down about every Dominant at the resort from Russia. Nothing is clicking and now her Dom purchaser is getting desperate to offer her up to Dimitri.

When Dimitri subtly meets Rya, he is enchanted by her right away, but when she goes to dominate a female submissive, he offers up his much bigger room to them all the while watching Rya do her thing, while she also retains a sweet “no peeking” policy to Dimitri. Dimitri though has a darker side as being part of a bratva in Russia that is dangerous as well as cursed. While he wants to partake of Rya, he must also keep his heart resistant to her as loving her could well sign her death warrant.

To keep her safe, Dimitri whisks her off to the Grand Canyon for a few days of BDSM, exploring and of course falling in love. But it is never to be as anyone Dimitri falls for will have a hit on them.

What I loved with the first part of the story was how open and wonderfully caring Rya was. She had a job as a hospice nurse, providing comfort to her patients and family on their last days on earth. Her family is a motorcycle club family that is almost as powerful as a bratva in Russia. While she has curves, she is confident in who she is and what she wants. While she will Dominate females, she is a submissive next to a male.

Dimitri on the other hand, was relaxed while spending a few days alone with Rya. He was alpha and still always on alert, he smiled a lot and showed a gentler side that he can’t let many people see. He goes about fulfilling as many of Rya’s fantasies as he can in a short time knowing when it is over, he can no longer see her.

Well, their absence has been noticed by rival bratva members and the game is up when they return. Dimitri must show the world he has no feelings for the submissive he has fallen for, allowing her to have a scene with his brother, Alex and some friends. This about kills Rya. She has fallen hard for Dimitri and the thought of another man touching her or a woman touching Dimitri is abhorrent.

Then the second half of the story starts and it is like two different characters take over. Rya becomes a brat with some good reasons why and Dimitri becomes more dominant with less wiggle room to be free and loving. I found myself disconnecting with these two characters from people I adored to people I wanted no part in knowing. The story moved slowly and went on way to long for my comfort. And everything seemed to turn sexual with very little time to grow the characters beyond the first half of the story. Things change a lot and I didn’t like the change. Still don’t like what happens.

Going into the book I was all five stars up to the point the story changes and it went downhill from there. While I loved seeing more of the Russian culture, it became a life I couldn’t relate too nor want my characters to be a part of, kind of like a few genres I have  love hate relationship with.

There is a lot of free love kind of vibes coming from these characters that is darker than the groovy kind of free love. Tons of bodyguards and those bodyguards doing the characters. It felt off to me and I wanted to scream at the characters for changing, especially Rya. She went from a strong character to what I felt was a kept woman with no value in a short period of time.

So while I love this series, I do have problems with Dominant Russian men making me feel like a submissive woman doesn’t have a intelligent cell in their brains. Go female power in a submissive suit! Yep, that’s me, strong women who can do things outside of the bedroom as well as submit in a bedroom. Just my two cents.

About Ann Mayburn

With over forty published books, Ann is Queen of the Castle to her husband and three sons in the mountains of West Virginia. In her past lives she’s been an Import Broker, a Communications Specialist, a US Navy Civilian Contractor, a Bartender/Waitress, and an actor at the Michigan Renaissance Festival. She also spent a summer touring with the Grateful Dead-though she will deny to her children that it ever happened.

From a young Ann has had a love affair with books would read everything she could get her hands on. As Ann grew older, and her hormones kicked in, she discovered bodice ripping Fabio-esque romance novels. They were great at first, but she soon grew tired of the endless stories with a big wonderful emotional buildup to really short and crappy sex. Never a big fan of purple prose, throbbing spears of fleshy pleasure and wet honey pots make her giggle, she sought out books that gave the sex scenes in the story just as much detail and plot as everything else-without using cringe worthy euphemisms. This led her to the wonderful world of Erotic Romance, and she’s never looked back.

Now Ann spends her days trying to tune out cartoons playing in the background to get into her ‘sexy space’ and has accepted that her Muse has a severe case of ADD.

Ann loves to talk with her fans, as long as they realize she’s weird, and that sarcasm doesn’t translate well via text.

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Shari is the Delighted Reader. Married to her Prince Charming and mother to two Princesses and one Prince. When she is not slaving away as Cinderella she loves to get lost in the pages of a good book. Never without a reading device and a few good paperback books, because she never knows when she might get 5 minutes to read!
  • I can understand why your feelings changed for this story after a switch up like that. Sounds like it could have been a good story but big changes like that most times don’t sit well with me either.

    • Shari Delighted Read

      It just started out wonderful and then when they got to Russia, I was like what? Going from a working part of society to doing nothing but being arm candy started getting on my nerves.

  • It’s hard to switch gears like that, for sure. It does sound really good up until things up ended.

    • Shari Delighted Read

      Yep, and I started book 3 (review for tomorrow) and finished book 4 (review Saturday) and all I can say is I am not a fan of how women are treated if this is for real. Not bad, but they don’t have careers or seem to go anywhere without a ton of bodyguards.

  • Hmmm, too erotic for me

    • Shari Delighted Read

      Sorry to hear that. It was over the top on the erotic sex at times that I started skipping some scenes.

  • The romance sounds stifling overall. This isn’t going to work for me

    • Shari Delighted Read

      It was pretty good right up till they switched to Russia and then it became a totally different couple. I loved it when they were so free in the US.

      • I blame it on Putin! lol

        • Shari Delighted Read

          Ok, I will put the blame on him, lol

  • Ahhh, what better place for some BDSM than the good ol Grand Canyon. lol. I usually don’t care for the cover models on books, but lordy, I want to read this book just because that beautiful man is on it.

    • Shari Delighted Read

      The Grand Canyon was beautiful to see along with their love growing. Covers tend to sometimes make or break a book buying spree for me, but these men on her covers hypnotized me right away. Luckily I bought most of them and only received book 3 for a review.