Review: Across A Star-Swept Sea by Diana Peterfreund

Review: Across A Star-Swept Sea by Diana Peterfreund
Across A Star-Swept Sea

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Series: For Darkness Shows the Stars #2
Genres: Post-Apocalyptic Romance, Young Adult Romance
Published by Balzer + Bray
Released on October 14, 2014
Pages: 452
Format: Paperback
Source: Purchased

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From Rampant and Ascendant author Diana Peterfreund comes this thrilling companion to For Darkness Shows the Stars, now in paperback. Across a Star-Swept Sea is a romantic science-fiction reimagining of the classic The Scarlet Pimpernel.

Centuries after wars nearly destroyed civilization, the islands of Galatea and Albion stand alone, a paradise where even the Reduction—the devastating brain disorder that sparked the wars—is a distant memory. Yet on Galatea, an uprising against the aristocracy has turned deadly. The revolutionaries' weapon is a drug that damages their enemies' brains, and the only hope is a mysterious spy known as the Wild Poppy. On neighboring Albion, no one suspects that the Wild Poppy is actually famously frivolous teenage aristocrat Persis Blake. Her gossipy flutternotes are encrypted plans, her pampered sea mink is genetically engineered for spying, and her well-publicized new romance with handsome Galatean medic Justen Helo . . . is her most dangerous mission ever.

When Persis discovers that Justen is keeping a secret that could plunge New Pacifica into another dark age, she realizes she's not just risking her heart, she's risking the world she's sworn to protect.

The Delight

After being left in awe of the worldbuilding and plot of For Darkness Shows the Stars and reading the short intro novella that came between the first book and this one, I was ready to drop back in the author’s post-apocalyptic world for this exciting retelling of The Scarlet Pimpernel.


I suppose since this is more companion novel than sequel that Across a Star-Swept Sea could be read standalone or out of order, but I think some of the late crossover elements as well as background make more sense when they are read in order.

The author weaves an elaborate history and backdrop for the events and setting of her story.  I like how she does this while still delivering an exciting and well-paced story.  The characters are colorful and larger than life.  They have their flaws and vulnerabilities, but their strengths, too.  The stakes are much higher in this one with death seeming easier than the punishment of a pill that takes away intelligence and reduces people to little more than docile animals if they are ‘tried and found guilty’ by the revolution.

Like the earlier book, this one retells a classic or, rather, is influenced by an old classic, Baroness Orczy’s The Scarlet Pimpernell.  The elements of drastic and bloody revolution, some revolutionaries only wanting to go as far as change and others have a thirst for horrific deeds and power with another nation just across the sea who have a stable government.  This calls for the need of a hero who can stand up to the atrocity until peace and sound thinking can be restored.

I found it fascinating that everyone is forced to consider what a class-based society, equality of humanity, equality of gender, repression vs. freedom of choice, and constant revenge vs forgiveness are the elements involved at the heart of the story.  Relevant one might suggest.

Persis is the main narrator of the story with her male counterpart, Justen, as the one who most shares the narration.  They are seeming opposites and wary partners throughout.  Persis is an aristocrat and Justen a commoner.  She is also the heroic Wild Poppy who steps into the dangerous role of rescuing those most affected by the terror of the southern island’s bloody revolution.  Justen is a scientist from Galatea, the south island and he’s a revolutionary and is disgusted by aristos particularly the Albinians like Persis of the northern island.  He doesn’t take reform as far as others and is horrified by what is happening.  They work at cross purposes and together in turn because of their hidden identities and agendas.   They have a derision for each other’s respective ways of life until, in close proximity, they realize they might have ignorantly misunderstood.  Persis has to concede that Justen may have a point about many aristos and he learns that not all aristos are the same in their attitude toward commoners.  There’s a great tension there because they both have their secrets.  Persis and Justen have a love interest, but it is way in the back seat.  Rightly so, since they are both fighting to save people and break the power of the extreme revolutionaries not to mention they have reasons not to trust or respect each other- or so they think.

My only real niggle is the ending.  It came like rain on a campfire- rushed and abrupt and disappointing.  It leads the reader in the right direction in a hazy ‘this is how it will likely happen in the future’ way, but I wanted a bit more than just speculation and I definitely wanted something more for Persis and Justen after all they had been through.  A follow-up novella like what was done with the first book would have been great.  And that brings a second niggle to mind, actually- the crossover characters.  It felt more like a distraction even including them in this story since they, too, were part of that hazy, rushed ending.  I was left with a few ‘what abouts’ and I hate being left curious.

But, all in all, I loved the story and will miss this world that the author created.  I would snap up in a flash any new installments to the series if the author chose to write one.  Probably one of my favorite YA Post-Apocalyptic series ever and I heartily recommend it.


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I was born and raised near Sacramento, CA. I have read since I was four years old and developed tastes that run the gamut of literature. I went away to college and have a degree in education, a certificate in family history research, and a certificate in social work. I worked for a non-profit agency with low income families for 20 years which included being responsible for the children’s library and promoting/teaching adult literacy. I have lived in Southeast Michigan for the last 18 years and I am currently a book addicted homemaker with a cat and husband who keep me grounded. Recently, I made it a challenge to review each book that I have read as a favor to author friends who said reviews are important. I have done reviews for Good Reads, Amazon, eBay, and Smashwords, but mostly at Goodreads and Amazon.