Review: Kept by Maya Banks

Review: Kept by Maya BanksKept by Maya Banks

Series: #3 The Enforcers
Genres: Erotic Romance
Published by Berkley on October 25, 2016
Pages: 320
Format: Paperback
Source: Publisher
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He can’t change who he is...

A horrific childhood has made Silas the man he is today: dangerous, distrustful, and demanding. He’s lived in self-imposed solitude, convinced that no woman could ever accept his need for absolute control—in business and pleasure. That is, until a young violinist walks into one of his buildings and into his life.

She can’t change what she wants...

Haley has been struggling to fulfill her father’s dying wish: to attend a prestigious music school in New York City. But even working two jobs, she can’t afford the tiniest of apartments. Seeing her hopeless and near tears, Silas vows to help and protect her, no matter the cost to himself. But when Haley meets his every demand with unwavering acceptance and love, he is overwhelmed by her goodness and gentle spirit. He knows that the dark stain on his soul can never be erased—and rather than risk destroying the most beautiful thing he's ever experienced, he knows he'll have to do the hardest thing he's ever had to face. Let her go. But he's totally unprepared for the lengths Haley will go to fight for his love and a future brighter than the sun...

The Delight

Full-filling a dying father’s wish, talented violinist, dark protector, and danger surrounding them really drew me in and made me eager to experience my first book by the author.  While I have mixed feelings about this book, I’m not sorry to have read it.

Review

Kept is actually book three in The Enforcers series.  The first two books were about one couple and this book started a new romance arc with a new couple and the ongoing trouble with the mafia types out for revenge.  I didn’t read the first two books, but I did alright jumping in with this one because the author set the table well bringing the new reader up to speed on the situation and characters.

I went into this one loving that the heroine, Hayley, is attempting to fulfill her own dreams and her father’s dying wish that she attend a prestigious school and hone her musical talent.  She works hard and faces the big city alone.  I was also captivated by this dark soul, Silas, who is moved by her music during the night and it gives him peace even though his life has been anything, but peaceful.

I had high hopes of loving this pair and their story.

But then, it stopped working.  This was instant everything and it rushed it way through each moment in the romance and character development.  I might have tolerated this better, but for a few factors.

First, Silas introduced BDSM elements that was not addressed or presented in a healthy, safe, well-developed way.  They’ve known each other for mere days and this is their first serious conversation about a relationship.  After a five minute general (no specifics) convo about his unique control needs in the bedroom and his need to control her whole life, she basically nods and is all in.  They don’t really know each other and she has no idea what he means or what she’s getting into.  Other than his physical attractiveness, her feelings hinge on her gratitude for all he has done for her and that he seems this dark, lonely type.  This naive innocent is ordered to present as a submissive right after he gets done swiftly telling her that he has control issues with no details or discussion and then she just does with no questions or hesitation.  She goes along with everything from bedroom control to control of her life after only meeting him a few weeks before.  And this is while she thinks he’s got another woman and he’s with this other woman.  What is wrong with this girl?

There was just no depth to Hayley and the part that is introduced about Silas doesn’t really factor in for long other than overblown dramatic feelings of guilt over stuff and ‘his darkness’.

This romance was just there for two near strangers with no development or explanation or conversation- and it’s a dominant/submissive too.  They both wallow inside their heads about stuff and don’t talk.

And for the second half of the book, I was left scratching my head over the new layer of conflict for the pair.  Like I said before, I didn’t read the first two books about the previous couple, but there was enough of an explanation to get the gist.  So, here in this one, same scenario (sounded like it was exactly the same) and Silas, who was there all along, does all the same wrong stuff that Drake did and caused the same drama.  Made no sense.

In summary, it wasn’t a total loss in that I was able to finish the book and remember some high points in the midst of it all.  Too much of this needed more time and development and shouldn’t have been introduced into the plot if it was just going to get raced over like potholes in a swift moving car.  I want to still try her older books particularly the historicals, but I’m not at all sure I want to touch another modern.

I rec’d this book from Penguin Group in exchange for an honest review.

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About Maya Banks

Maya Banks is the #1 New York Times and #1 USA Today and bestselling author of the Surrender Trilogy. Her other chart toppers have included erotic romance, romantic suspense, contemporary romance, and Scottish historical romance. She lives in the South with her husband, three children and a variety of pets.

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I was born and raised near Sacramento, CA. I have read since I was four years old and developed tastes that run the gamut of literature. I went away to college and have a degree in education, a certificate in family history research, and a certificate in social work. I worked for a non-profit agency with low income families for 20 years which included being responsible for the children’s library and promoting/teaching adult literacy. I have lived in Southeast Michigan for the last 18 years and I am currently a book addicted homemaker with a cat and husband who keep me grounded. Recently, I made it a challenge to review each book that I have read as a favor to author friends who said reviews are important. I have done reviews for Good Reads, Amazon, eBay, and Smashwords, but mostly at Goodreads and Amazon.
  • Debbie Haupt

    Thanks Sophia!

    • Yep, Debbie. LOL..

      • Debbie Haupt

        😉 sometimes there are just no words and If I started i’d go off on a rant

        • Oh, I get it. In fact, I guess that was your intention here. 🙂

  • Oh I can tell by your review that I wouldn’t like her character at all. Do people really act like that in real life. Just fall in line and do what they’re told after knowing someone for a few days? I sure hope not.

    • I was so appalled by her idiocy (at least to me) that I couldn’t even get mad. Oh man, I really hope not, but I suspect there might be, Mary. I read a book about Manson and some of his women were that way.

  • Aw too bad. I haven’t read her erotica but I have a feeling I would go the same way you did. I did love her scottish historicals (I’ve only read a couple) so I may just go to her romantic suspense and skip these.

    • Yeah! I was really curious to try one of her books and already had this one sent to me. I can be rather picky about how D/s and BDSM stories are presented so I was none too thrilled here. But like you, I’m going to give her other stuff a try. Highlanders first. 🙂

  • I don’t think that this one is for me. I don’t really pick up erotica but this sounds like it has a lot of issues. I hope your next read is better for you.

    • Thanks, Carole. Yeah, this one did have its issue. 🙂

      Already read a few good ones.

  • Oy. Even though it wasn’t a total loss, it still sounds like not enough for me to want to read.

    • Yeah, I couldn’t recommend it. I’m going to head to her historicals next when I give her writing a go again.

  • Aww that’s too bad it didn’t work out! I’ve only read her historicals and loved them so maybe I’ll just stick to those for now. Better luck next time! Thanks for the review!

    • Yeah, I’d heard some issues to be concerned about before I picked this up so I wasn’t over expectant, but I realized that those issues were issues for me, too. I definitely plan to try the historicals, Cyn.