Vicious Cycle by Katie Ashley #Review

Vicious Cycle by Katie Ashley #ReviewVicious Cycle by Katie Ashley

Series: #1 Vicious Cycle
Genres: Contemporary Romance
Published by Signet on June 2, 2015
Pages: 336
Format: Paperback
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When I saw a new to me author was starting up a new biker romance series, I had to jump on that. A hard-bitten MC club member, an intrepid school teacher, a sweet little girl and a story of redemption, love and revenge made for quite the exciting prospect.

The story opens with Deacon Malloy, Sergeant at Arms to the Hells Raiders MC, discovering that he has a five year old daughter- a daughter who has been through terrible things. Of all the people to have an innocent child depending on them, he is floored that it is him. With word that one of his most vicious and worst enemies is well of aware of his new soft spot, he is extra careful about Willow even keeping her back from school to hide her under guard until he can take care of the threat. Next thing he knows, he has her sweet yet sassy equally innocent teacher barking in his face with threats of CPS if he doesn’t do something about Willow missing school.

Alex Evans loves teaching and her students, but little Willow was a favorite so dumb idea or not, she marches into a biker club compound to give the dad what-for about Willow being out of school. He’s an intimidating man living a life that she barely can comprehend, but she soon learns that there is more going on than the dead-beat dad situation she was expecting. Against her better judgment, she lets a little girl and her gruff father talk her into home-schooling and slowly becomes part of their world only to have that world turn dangerous and ugly on her.

Alright, so I jumped into this one eagerly and the enjoyment stayed with me for a while, but not all the way. The author set up an intense, engaging story and introduced equally well-written characters. I like what I saw and the promise of where it was going- until it didn’t. That is, it went somewhere else and it just became an okay and even mildly disappointing story for me.

I tried to figure out what it was so I could explain it. From my perspective, I think the author tried too hard with both her characters. First, she had to make the biker truly bad and then redeem him and then she had to make the cutie school teacher believable as a biker’s lover. In the process, it emasculated him so that he was barely recognizable as a biker and morphed her into someone that I didn’t recognize and really didn’t like. There had already been an incident in her past that, while made for a surprising twist, affected my view of Alex even as I told myself that she was young when she screwed up huge. But that last bit where she turned into some harsh lying thing that wasn’t above being self-absorbed in her vengeance while accusing Deacon of the same when he was justifiably hurt and scared over her ‘I got lucky I didn’t die horribly, but I act like that never was a possibility because I’m a bad girl superhero with skills’ act just finished it for me.

It wasn’t all disappointing. I loved who they were in the beginning and I loved the possibility of a hot romance between them because opposites attract and a bit of forbidden love does it for me. I absolutely was so taken with the daddy-daughter moments and Alex had a huge part in guiding Deacon in being a good father. I loved Deacon’s mom and his brothers along with the club setting.

So this leaves me with some positive and some less than positives to say about this book. I’m interested enough to see what happens next. I would recommend this one to those who enjoy moderately dark and gritty biker hot romance.

My thanks to Penguin Group for the opportunity to read this one in exchange for an honest review.

Romance Roundabout #198 CR

Cliché Klatch #115 ‘You’re a bad influence on me’

New to Me #98 author/series

About Katie Ashley

Katie Ashley is the New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of The Proposition Series, Runaway Train series, and several New Adult and Young Adult titles. She spent the last eleven years teaching both middle and high school English, but is now a full-time writer and currently lives outside of Atlanta.

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I was born and raised near Sacramento, CA. I have read since I was four years old and developed tastes that run the gamut of literature. I went away to college and have a degree in education, a certificate in family history research, and a certificate in social work. I worked for a non-profit agency with low income families for 20 years which included being responsible for the children’s library and promoting/teaching adult literacy. I have lived in Southeast Michigan for the last 18 years and I am currently a book addicted homemaker with a cat and husband who keep me grounded. Recently, I made it a challenge to review each book that I have read as a favor to author friends who said reviews are important. I have done reviews for Good Reads, Amazon, eBay, and Smashwords, but mostly at Goodreads and Amazon.
  • Ah, I know what you mean, twisting characters into a plot isn’t a very good idea… I have a few books of her series “The proposition”, I’ll let you know what I think of it when I get to read it – hopefully, before next year !

    • I would be interested to know what she does with a different sort of scenario. I’m not sure biker romance is quite her niche though I’ll give it one more shot.

  • Glad you seemed to enjoy this one, it sounds a bit different than some of the other MC books I’ve heard about. You’re on a roll with these biker boys:)

    • I do enjoy a good biker romance, but this one was actually rather weak compared to others I’ve read.

  • Lindy Gomez

    I agree with you Sophia. I felt like the characters were changed too much, and became unrecognizable. I loved Willow, Deacon’s mom, and brother’s too. Well-rounded review!

    Lindy@ A Bookish Escape

    • Exactly, there is growth in a flawed character and then there is Miraclegro. Oh yes, the mom of those three boys was a wonderful character and a favorite.

  • its too bad when you see a author trying too hard with her characters. I am glad that there were some positive aspects of the story though.

    • I really was trying to figure out how to word what went wrong for me and that was the best I could come up with. They just fundamentally changed and while growth is good, I should still recognize the character when all’s said and done. So yeah, some good and some bad.

  • this doesn’t sound like a bad beginning. Not perfect, but curious enough to continue is good. Maybe the author will settle down in book two.

    • That’s what I’m wondering so I might give the next book a go.

  • I’m glad you found some good in it Sophia. You liked it WAY more than I did. This one had me fairly livid when I was reading it. I hope the next one has more yays to it for ya. I’ll be curious to see how that goes.

    • I can guess what parts had you livid. Can’t say that I was all that calm about some stuff, either. I do want to see what happens with a different heroine and I did like Rev, but my patience will be on a short leash if things start to go south again.

  • vvb reads

    This catches my eye mostly because I started watching Sons of Anarchy which is in the same genre.

    • I’ve never watched the show, but I started liking some biker romance after reading Kristen Ashley and Joanna Wylde. This one was just alright for me.