Hold Your Breath by Katie Ruggle #Review

Posted April 5, 2016 by Sophia Rose in Reviews / 14 Comments

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I received this book for free from Publisher in exchange for an honest review.
This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Hold Your Breath by Katie Ruggle #Review
Hold Your Breath

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Series: #1 Search and Rescue
Genres: Romantic Suspense
Published by Sourcebooks Casablanca
Released on April 5, 2016
Pages: 384
Format: eARC
Source: Publisher
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I was very excited to try this new series by a new to me author primarily because of the setting- mountain search & rescue work.  And it wasn’t just the common police and fire, but dive rescue team, too.  It was new and exciting all around when paired with the romance and the suspense.  I enjoyed the author’s easy blend of quirky humor, adorable heartwarming, rising heat, tightening suspense, and taut action.

As noted above, this is a launch of a new series, but I did want to point out that there is a prequel novella, On His Watch, available for free.  It can easily be skipped to this one, but worth snagging since it features secondary character, Derek Warner’s romance.

The story opens with the Search & Rescue dive team up at an iced over mountain reservoir practicing a rescue.  Lou is new to the team and is working hard to prove she belongs even though it tickles her fancy to poke and tease at the too serious and stern leader, Callum Cooke.  Lou is attracted to the seeming frigid man and wishes to see respect for her in his eyes though that will be tough because she tends to bumble and stumble around him.

Lou is in the water doing her practice rescue when she kicks into something under the water.  A body floats to the surface.  And now things start to get interesting.  Lou is determined to help discover the identity of the body in the lake aka HDG (Headless Dead Guy, but she must be PC about that).  To her surprise, her attempt to rope Callum into being her sleuthing partner works though she is pretty sure his Nancy Drew remark says it all.

But the body is only one of several disturbing incidents.  From slashed tires, to footprints outside her cabin window, to vandalism, and escalating actions, Lou learns she has a stalker.  Callum quietly makes it clear that she now has more than a sleuthing partner until the stalker is found.  Lou worked hard to learn independence and prove to her parents and to herself that she is no longer that passive, needy girl so relying on Callum and the rest of the S&R team’s help is tough.  But if it means more time with the irascible mysterious Callum?  She’ll take it.  And if her crush starts turning more serious and Callum’s actions indicate more than a mild interest, Lou won’t think about that too much.

The story, by it’s setting and elements alone, was sure to gain my interest and I’d already met many of the key players through the prequel.  So I was set to dive in and immerse in the story.  It was a good blend of gently-paced contemporary romance, exciting ice/water rescue scenes, and suspense.    It took me a little bit to sync with the author’s writing style and get used to Lou’s personality, but then I got used to it and settled in.

Lou is the main narrator with her unknown stalker getting brief snippets here and there.  So it was a big deal that I connect with her which I eventually did.  Lou came off as a little flaky to me which was where I struggled, but I don’t want to give a wrong impression since ultimately I liked her and respected her.  She’s smart, capable, skilled, and somewhat vulnerable.  Her sense of humor is fun and she brightens each scene.  She has a tendency toward sarcasm, off-beat humor, and chatter when she is nervous.

Now, the choice to give Lou all the narration and leave Callum as somewhat a mystery was understandable, but it also contributed to me struggling to figure him out and connect with him as Lou’s love interest.  While I appreciated the slow tease of getting to know him along with Lou, I also felt that there was always some distance even by the end.  It’s not until late in the story that his background and thus, the reason for his behavior and closed personality, are made known.  The reader really has to work for it to pull out nuggets about his personality and backstory to get to know him.  He’s likeable and trustworthy, but holds people at a distance including Lou though she comes the closest to figuring out what makes him tick.  I’m a curious sort and wanted the whys behind it.  With Callum it’s all about subtlety from his routine, to his expression, his speech, and his emotions.  He’s actually Lou’s polar opposite.

Fortunately, this worked for the romance.  The author didn’t spotlight attraction and lust though it was there.  She put this pair into daily activities and lots of time spent together- working around the house, their sleuthing case, ice rescue, the coffee shop.  Each little scene, conversation, and shared glance meant something.  It was slow burn and I was convinced it was going to be a sweet romance until three-fourths of the way when the sexy times happened.  And it happened right when it should and I didn’t feel the story lacked because of it.  Both the characters have hang-ups whether it is Lou’s past with an ex and manipulative parents or Callum’s suppressed emotions and need for order because of his own past so taking their time made sense.

As to the suspense, there was the murdered man from the lake and the stalker.  I enjoyed how both the suspense elements played out.  One was easy to figure out and was meant to be and it finished in this book at the exciting climax scene.  But the other element will be an ongoing issue into the next story.  The author cleverly introduced the next hero and connected him and his situation with the suspense so it will tie easily with this story.

In summary, I was left with a new series to anticipate.  The author’s blend of humor, romance, small town- search & rescue setting, and suspense was a fantastic hit for me.  I can recommend this to contemporary romance and romantic suspense fans.

My thanks to Sourcebooks Casablanca for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

Challenges Met:

Romance Roundabout #102 RS
Literary Pickers #92 ruler

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I was born and raised near Sacramento, CA. I have read since I was four years old and developed tastes that run the gamut of literature. I went away to college and have a degree in education, a certificate in family history research, and a certificate in social work. I worked for a non-profit agency with low income families for 20 years which included being responsible for the children’s library and promoting/teaching adult literacy. I have lived in Southeast Michigan for the last 18 years and I am currently a book addicted homemaker with a cat and husband who keep me grounded. Recently, I made it a challenge to review each book that I have read as a favor to author friends who said reviews are important. I have done reviews for Good Reads, Amazon, eBay, and Smashwords, but mostly at Goodreads and Amazon.

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Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
6 years ago

I must start reading this author!

Sophia Rose
6 years ago

She’s a newbie, but I think she did fantastic. The free novella was okay, but she really shined in this longer novel-length one. Can’t wait to read book two with the biker-fire fighter hero.

6 years ago

Sounds like it’s a good one and I kind of like a slow burn romance. You’ve got me wondering which storyline gets finished. Glad you enjoyed it! Very thorough review!

Sophia Rose
6 years ago
Reply to  Lorna

I didn’t want to give away spoilers on the mysteries so kept it vague. 🙂 I thought she was clever the way she wrote her romance.

6 years ago

I started reading the prequel novella for this series, On His Watch, last week. I haven’t finished it yet, even though It’s less than 100 pages. Glad to know that I may continue on afterwards, since this one seems to be a solid read.

Sophia Rose
6 years ago
Reply to  Lekeisha

There is a different feel between the prequel and this one. I think she does better developing a story at novel-length. But I did like meeting the characters and the background in the prequel.

6 years ago

I have to try her one day

Sophia Rose
6 years ago
Reply to  Blodeuedd

Yes, exciting new writer.

Anna@herding cats&burning soup

Well damn! I skipped these for review because it sounded like they wouldn’t be full stories from the warnings they gave. It sounds very good! I love the search and rescue ones and with a little twist even better 😀

Sophia Rose
6 years ago

Huh, I missed that warning. Probably a good thing or I might have hesitated, too. I wonder if the warning about not being full was because of the ongoing mystery that seems to continue even if the other mystery wraps up with the S&R action scenes and the romance.
Yes, the backdrop of the Search & Rescue teams are pretty cool. This one was the diving team and the next book moves to the firefighters.

Anna@herding cats&burning soup
Reply to  Sophia Rose

That sounds similar to so many other series. It was just a really odd warning and I’d been bitten by one right around then so quickly closed out that request. lol

Oh I love me some firefighters. I don’t think I’ve ever read about a dive team come to think of it.

Sophia Rose
6 years ago

It is so hard to tell with those warnings. I don’t mind having warnings and think they are in general a good thing, but I’ve also discovered that the warning is interpreted differently for each of us. Like this one, here. Or even some of the sexual ones that aren’t as intense as they say while others are exactly as intense as they say. But I do like the ones that tell me there is a cliffhanger or it’s not a standalone. Yep, those I like a lot. 🙂

Anna@herding cats&burning soup
Reply to  Sophia Rose

Yup very true. I’ve had many tell me they were SO erotic and then they’re just mainstream. lol

This warning really had me thinking cliffhangers at the time. And for the most part if I hear that I run.

Sophia Rose
6 years ago

I guess they were just being cautious, but I hate cliffhangers, too. This one was no cliffhanger. Ongoing mystery, sure, but nothing that has me so anxious that i have to know the answer now.