Review: Finding Master Right by Sparrow Beckett

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Review: Finding Master Right by Sparrow Beckett
Finding Master Right

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Series: Masters Unleashed #1
Genres: BDSM Romance, Contemporary Romance
Published by Intermix
Released on July 21, 2015
Pages: 276
Format: eBook
Source: Purchased
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Going into Finding Master Right, I had no idea of what to expect. A Master who wants a slave,  a submissive finding what she needs. It was a delight to see how the body wants one thing, the hidden heart wants the same, but the active mind keeps leading both astray. The chemistry is off the hook, but both resist with everything they have in their mind. Will the mind or heart win?


We meet Kate at a Halloween party her kinky friends have put together. She has watched her friends and she wants something she really can’t understand, but she does know not to settle for less than the best. When a Dom comes onto her a little to hard, Banner comes to the rescue, which she reminds him she didn’t need. The two strike up a conversation. It is all pretty high-level about BDSM, but Banner knows she can’t give him what he needs: a slave. The two agree to partner together to help her find her Dom.

The first meeting with a friend of Banner’s doesn’t go very well. Kate is not very subbie like and smarts off, but to give her credit, the guy she is introduced to isn’t any catch. Banner agrees to train Kate, help her find her limits and then introduce her to more of his friends.

Banner is part of a trio of friends you will find over the next few days as my reviews release. Ambrose and Konstantin are the other two. Ambrose had some page time as he becomes involved with Kate through Banner. Konstatnin is in Russia for the first part of the story, but comes back looking sleazy with two submissives that he treats almost aloofly. They get their own books, so I won’t go into them much more now, just to say this groups is a close knit family of friends.

Kate’s character came across kind of bad in the beginning. She really hasn’t look at what she is interested in or not. On the other side, she is almost like any new submissive who has lived in a world where women are supposed to be strong and not bow down to men. This causes a power struggle between the two that leads Banner to feel she could never be the slave he needs and desires.

Banner on the flip side doesn’t totally define what a slave means to him. With BDSM, it is what you make of it, but when reading, you need to know what qualifications he is looking for to understand why he keeps rebuffing Kate. He does say he wants control over her whole life and that he would cherish is slave as a queen.

Banner also has a family that he keeps Kate away from. It’s not expected he introduce her since she isn’t his. But you find out how Banner is an artist who came back when his father’s health declined and took over the family business (he’s rich now). He still paints, but you don’t see his depth or need to go back to it. His mother has given up on life even with three kids, one still a minor. The daughter is old enough to move on, but she stays taking care of the mother and her younger brother. The younger brother is extremely close to Banner, but is also dealing with being gay. His slight build is also getting him harassed at school. The dynamic of the brothers is incredibly moving. Banner would be lost without his younger brother and events happen that test them both.

Kate’s family doesn’t make much of an appearance, but her friendship is what seems to get her through some tough moments. Work is her other crutch as she deals with addiction as a therapist.

The two meet for sessions and Kate brats out, Banner puts her back into place. The dynamic is interesting to watch, but also try to understand where they are really going with these sessions. Kate gets overcome with lust and begs, Banner tries not to give in wanting to keep it “clinical”, but the two combust when they can’t contain themselves.

I mostly struggled from not understanding what slave meant to Banner as I found he really wants a submissive that when not at work, is pretty much at his beck and call. I don’t mean to clean house either. I guess that is a slave, but there wasn’t protocol to guide her every minute of her time like I would have found with a slave.  It didn’t seem so rigid what he wanted, but that might just be me.

Anyho, I enjoyed watching the play between the two and wondered at times why Kate put up with something that happened as long as she did. There is a section of the story mostly left without details and it left me feeling kind of ughy! Besides that, I really enjoyed the story and the glimpses beyond the story to the future.


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About Sparrow Beckett

Two writers in two countries transform into the super writing duo, Sparrow Beckett, each night after wrangling their housefuls of children and pets. They trade the cape and colorful tights for tattoos and cups of coffee then set out to create a world where readers fall in love with heroes and the women who willingly go to their knees for them. Their books are the products of two kinky minds who don’t take themselves too seriously.

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Shari is the Delighted Reader. Married to her Prince Charming and mother to two Princesses and one Prince. When she is not slaving away as Cinderella she loves to get lost in the pages of a good book. Never without a reading device and a few good paperback books, because she never knows when she might get 5 minutes to read!

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Jenea Whittington
3 years ago

This sounds really, really good!

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago

It was so sexy and frustrating at the same time. Really enjoyed it!

3 years ago

oh I’m curious! the cover is great and the story looks good as well! thanks for sharing!

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago
Reply to  Melliane

It’s pretty good! The author is really two authors writing together. I have been looking at some of their other stories as well. This one hooked me.

Sophia Rose
3 years ago

That dynamic between the pair of them and the family element have me interested. I’ll look forward to the other series reviews.

Great tune! I wasn’t familiar with it, but I like it.

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago
Reply to  Sophia Rose

There is a new book in the series coming out in August, so I decided to start at the beginning. I probably didn’t have to after reading all four books, but I am glad I did. The next two books are reviewed and ready for the next two days. Been trying to write more reviews now that I have set up my office. I go to work and if I have time I pop in and write something. I love I Prevail. I heard a song of Taylor Swift’s they remade and had to see if they had more music… Read more »

Mary Kirkland
3 years ago

I like the premise for the story. Both characters sound intriguing.

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago
Reply to  Mary Kirkland

They are pretty interesting. One chooses a career based upon her family life, while the other comes home to help his family and his career is chosen for him. They both like kink, but she is one of those headstrong females that fights giving up what females are made to believe. Not that I disagreed, but kink has nothing to do with female rights. She just needed to realize he didn’t think of her as being below him in any way, but someone he cherished for giving him her trust.

Carole's Random Life
3 years ago

I am glad you enjoyed this one. It sounds like there is a whole lot to figure out in their relationship. I don’t think that this is one for me though. Great review!

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago

Sometimes these stories aren’t for everyone. I should say some of the kink had me cringing.

Angela @ Simply Angela

I’ve not heard of this one now I’m eager to check it out!

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago

I really enjoyed the dynamics of these two and how the heart, body and mind will all disagree.

Carole Rae
3 years ago

This one sounds a lot better than the other one. A lot more substance and I think I would like these two characters.

Shari Delighted Read
Shari Delighted Read
3 years ago
Reply to  Carole Rae

This one was pretty good. The second book kind of builds on a lie of his wealth. This one they know where they stand, they just have to get through the murky waters of what they expect and what they really want.