The Great Pick Up Line with One Last Song by S.K. Falls #TGPUL

Posted February 22, 2015 by Shari in The Great Pick Up Line / 8 Comments

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The Great Pick Up Line featuring
One Last Song by S.K. Falls

This pick up line is courtesy of Drew Dean.

I’m craving deep-fried Chinese doughnuts. Do you like those?

I bit down on my lip to keep the smile from spreading as I typed.
I like them.

Okay. What time should I meet you?

Fingers trembling slightly for reasons I didn’t care to explore, I typed back, Meet me where?

China Garden downtown. They have THE best Chinese doughnuts. They’re deep-fried. But I may have mentioned that already.

I stared at the screen. A date. Was he asking me out on a date? My phone beeped again. A picture of Chinese doughnuts, deep-fried to a golden brown. I almost snorted with laughter. One hour?

I’m there.

onelastsong_highresOne Last Song by S.K. Falls

I was seven when I swallowed my first needle.

My mom freaked out and rushed me to the emergency room.

She stayed by my side all night.

I never wanted it to end.

When you spend your whole life feeling invisible-when your parents care more about deals and deadlines than they do about you-you find ways of making people take notice. Little things at first. Then bigger. It’s scary how fast it grows. Then one day something happens that makes you want to stop. To get better. To be better. And for the first time, you understand what it’s like to feel whole, happy . . . loved. For the first time, you love someone back.

For me, that someone was Drew.

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Shari is the Delighted Reader. Married to her Prince Charming and mother to two Princesses and one Prince. When she is not slaving away as Cinderella she loves to get lost in the pages of a good book. Never without a reading device and a few good paperback books, because she never knows when she might get 5 minutes to read!

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Anna@herding cats&burning soup

LOL I need a hero that’ll encourage donut consumption. Heh. Yum! And now I seriously want one.

Sophia Rose
7 years ago

No kidding! Total weakness for me too.

Lola R
Lola R
7 years ago

A pick up line about food, that totally works for me. I don’t think I ever had chinese donuts, but now I want to know what those are! But the plot line seems a bit heavy and dark, not sure if that works for me.

Sophia Rose
7 years ago
Reply to  Lola R

That plot caught my attention too. She sounds very broken in spirit. Definitely not a lighter story.

Lover Of Romance
7 years ago

that is amazing. I love that line…what a fun way to start out. Besides who doesn’t love a quote about food…just makes me want to go do some cooking right now.

Sophia Rose
7 years ago

I am such a food hound and donuts are a definite weakness.

7 years ago

Well I want deep fried Chinese donuts now, this sounds cute 🙂

Sophia Rose
7 years ago

I’ve never had Chinese donuts, but I’m always up for trying something once- and hey, donuts so yummo.